This is a story about Spacy, and everybody loves Spacy.
Art: I think it does well, continuing the cartoony art style and adding stuff to the backgrounds. I will say it is a little inconsistent with where everything is and the color of the grass but it's fine.
Characters: Spacy is the star of this one, but I really wanted to highlight her limits. She can teleport any kind of object, but she doesn't have very much control over it. I also love to see everyone working together. Then there's the Fire cameo which revealed his new design, well before I changed it again.
Length: This is 5 pages, 21 panels. I wanted to space things out a little more so it's not so cluttered. That way I can do more with the backgrounds and it will be easier to see everything.
Text: There is about one textbox per page, which seems like a good amount. Once again, the story is pretty simple, but I think it is unique enough.
Creating it: This one took a while, not because it was particularly hard, I just ran out halfway through. When I got back to it, I finished it up and I like how it turned out.




